lead and gold

I forced myself to do a bit of editing. This piece is really just a collection of aphorisms, but it’s something different from my norm. *shrug*

100_original 'children' (table)
originally fifty_flashes 'adult' and 'child' (post)

 

Polished version of the fifty_flashes ‘funeral’ (original post here.) Using for 100_original 'ends' (table.) Edited while in Alaska, with some minor bits added today.

I am feeling very much relieved that my Brit Lit II prof moved teh due date for that killer poetry project to Thursday. I doubt I'm going to come up with anything decent by then (I've hit 1K, but only one of them really fits in with what we've been studying thus far) I... still have a while? Right. :P I might post the poems later, just to see if people can shred them enough that they're salvageable.

Been procrastinating all afternoon on my AP French project (Vietnam, where everyone hates the French), translated an old piece I wrote in German. To reiterate on the notes for that, I have no idea where I lifted the concept from; I just know it's not mine and I'd much appreciate anyone who could help me give credit where due. Also, I had to muss with phrasings and such to get it to translate "well", take that as you will, asides from the normal "blegh, I sucked three months ago" fixerupper thing.  Concrit, enough foreshadowing as to the "identity"?

Methinks I'll also use this for 100_original 'enemies' (table.)

 

I feel vaguely poked, so I'm going to post this. Notes at bottom under cut.

Edit of a very old fic - notes at bottom under cut.

 

 

Right, I'm going to stop being a stupid and anal and just ask for feedback on my recent crop of shorts, since I've been editing and editing and I'm not getting anywhere. After I get some feedback here, I'll move on to write_away , and they'll rip me to shreds and I'll feel much better. Using for 100_original 's 'sight' prompt (table.)